Paper folding assignment

Up above is my finished paper folding product and below is my original Photoshop work.

In this project I tried to show as much movement and flow as I could without it getting too out of hand.  Almost all of the right side image was done with the transform tool in Illustrator.  The background of the left side was a regular red Color Halftone pattern altered by filters and shapes thrown over it.  I had some fun making this piece but I'm not sure if I am totally happy with how it came out because I am not too good with origami type projects.